Written Genres: A Practical Introduction in the context

of the HKCEE and HKAL

Examinations.

 

Session 1:

Introduction to the 4 Genres.

 

Monday 17/5, Session One:

Teaching Writing through Genres.

A genre is best described as writing done for a specific purpose.

The purpose is the key, because the same text type, a letter for example,

can be written in different genres. We might write a letter to persuade a

friend to do something, in which case it would follow the rules of the

argumentative genre. Our letter might take the form of a proposal to solve

a common problem, which would place it in the expository genre. It might

even run through the pros and cons of a particular course of action, in which

case it's discursive. If the letter recounted something which had recently

happened to us, it would follow the generic rules of narrative.

 

There are a lot of text types, from letters to essays to reports to reviews to news

articles, so teaching all of them is impossible and frustrating for both the

teacher and the taught. But because people only really write for a handful of

purposes, the number of genres is much smaller, and therefore more teacher-

student friendly. If we teach a student how to construct an argument, they

will be able to write a successful text, because all arguments follow the same

generic pattern, whether that text is a letter, essay, or debate speech.

 

As we are primarily concerned with giving our students the skills they need

to succeed in the exams, we need only concern ourselves with four key

genres:

Argumentative (are gyoo MEN tuh tiv) writing aims to persuade

the reader that one viewpoint on an issue is correct.

 

Discursive (diss KER siv) texts outline both sides of an issue, and

may reach a conclusion as to which of them is preferable.

 

Expository (eks POZZ uh tree) writing informs. Common patterns in

exposition include cause-effect, problem-solution, and lists.

 

Narrative (NARR uh tiv) writing seeks to entertain by telling a

story. Stories based on personal experience belong to this genre, but are

called recounts.

 

The aim of teaching genres is to allow students to learn a standardised

approach which they can apply to all texts within a genre. With teacher

guidance, modelling and repeated practice, they will be able to write more

organised, fluent and less-error prone essays.

 

The first thing I do with my form 6 students is teach them to identify the

genre of any given topic, so that's where we'll start, too.

 

Here are the 2004 HKCEE topics:

1.     Imagine that you won a competition in a film magazine and the prize

was spending a weekend with your favourite movie star in America.

Now the magazine wants you to write an article describing what you

did together with the movie star and how you felt about him/her (even

the EA doesn't know that 'them' can be used in the singular!) at the end

of your stay.

 

The fact that this is an article tells us nothing about how to write it. There

are many different kinds of articles, belonging to different genres. There are

two ways to attack this task. It could be written as a recount or as an

exposition.

 

2.      The government wants to know what students think about the

following problems they sometimes have at secondary schools in Hong

Kong:

- having no one to talk to about personal problems

- unfair treatment from teachers

- peer pressure from classmates

- too much homework

You have been asked to write a report on at least two of these problems

and suggest ways in which they can be solved.

 

This one is expository. Problem-solution is one of the most common

expository forms. The fact that the question specifies a report is not

significant, as reports take many forms.

 

3.     Your aunt and uncle recently went away for the weekend and they

asked you to look after your six-year-old cousin. This was your first

experience of looking after a young child. You took him out for a walk,

but after answering a call on your mobile phone, you turned round to

find he had disappeared.

 

Your parents have asked you to write a letter to your aunt and uncle

explaining how you lost and found your cousin.

 

Apart from being patently ridiculous (wouldn't he or his parents, or his cousin

already have told them in person?), this is obviously a narrative. The fact

that it's a letter has little bearing on the form of the text.

 

Once you have identified the genre, planning the task becomes a matter of following a set formula.

 

Here's a selection from the last decade for you to categorise:

1.     The HK Police Force would like to improve its public image in HK

(where else? The EA obviously enjoy a bit of redundancy). It has asked

young people to make suggestions about what events or activities could

be organized to help the public learn more about the work of the Police

Force.

 

2.     You are Chris Wong. Your best friend Pat has been dating a schoolmate

called Sandy for several months . . . unfortunately you think you have

also fallen in love with Sandy. One day at school you find a note:

Dear Chris

There’s a party at the weekend and I

really want to go with you. How about it?

Let me know.

Sandy

Write a reply to Sandy explaining your feelings and saying what you

think both of you should do about the situation.

 

3.     You are taking part in a school debate on the following motion:

.  That pop singers and film stars are paid too much money, as they do

nothing useful for society.

Write one speech either supporting or opposing the motion.

 

4.     Modern equipment would have made life easier for Stone Age cavemen

and cavewomen. Which three pieces of equipment do you think would

have been most useful?

 

5.     It was your friend's birthday last week. To celebrate, you took your

friend (the EA don't like pronouns apparently) to a new restaurant for a

meal (what else? another redundancy)... Write a letter of complaint to

the newspaper (why not the restaurant?) describing some of the

problems you had and how you felt at the end of the evening.

 

6.     Recently you visited a zoo in China. You were horrified to see the

terrible conditions in which the animals were kept and the way some of

the visitors behaved. You have decided to write a letter ... you should

briefly describe what you saw. You should also write about at least two

of the following:

- how to improve conditions

- how visitors treat animals

- alternatives to zoos

 

Rationale

Many of our students find writing longer texts very challenging. There seem

to be two main reasons for this:

1. A lack of exposure to a wide range of model texts,

2. Concentration on word-, phrase-, and sentence-level structures, at

the expense of larger structures.

Many of our students are unaware that different types of writing follow

different patterns; that these patterns rarely change; and that they can be

learnt and reproduced with a little practice.

This situation is common to all students from different linguistic and cultural

backgrounds. As Australian teachers now face ever more culturally varied

classes, with students of disparate ability levels, an approach to teaching

writing which caters to the needs of all students is essential.

The genre approach has proven successful with students from native and ESL

backgrounds. Explicit teaching of genres and their features demystifies

writing for students. It shows them the patterns which different types of

writing follow, and allows them to reproduce these in their own writing.

My experience at this school with students in Forms 6 and 7 has shown that

they are receptive to this approach, and -given sufficient exposure to suitable

models and enough time for practice and consolidation- show marked improvement in their writing skills.

Terms

There are many definitions of genre, but in this paper, it is used to refer to a

type of writing which aims to fulfil a particular purpose. As the purpose


style='mso-font-kerning:0pt'>changes, so does the genre. A text which aims to entertain, like a short story,

belongs to a different genre to one which aims to persuade, such as a letter to

the editor.

Every text within a certain genre will share:

- a common purpose

-a set of parts presented in a predictable order

- key grammatical features.

These shared elements are called generic features.

It is important to distinguish here between genres and text-types. A letter is

not a genre, it is a text-type. The way that letter is written depends on its

purpose, and the purpose determines the genre. A letter persuading a friend

to stop smoking will follow the conventions of the argumentative genre.

Another letter, perhaps complaining about a bad restaurant experience,

would best be written as an exposition. A letter discussing a pregnant friend's

options would be discursive.

The core genres for the examinations, based on a survey of the last ten years'

papers, and in rank order are as follows:

HKCEE     Expository     HKAL    Expository

Narrative                 Argumentative

Argumentative             Discursive

Discursive*

*(i only, 2003)

 

 

Implementation

There is much talk of our overcrowded curriculum, but the simple truth is

that we have the students for five years before they sit for the HKCEE exams,

and another two before the A levels. This is longer than a degree in Medicine,

and certainly long enough to do a very thorough job of teaching a few key

genres.

When teaching a genre, it is important to follow the procedure outlined below.

This is similar to Glasser's well-known model for effective lesson design

("Excellence in Teaching"). I prefer to go through this process for each part of

the genre separately rather than to push the students to produce a whole text.

Spending a week on Introductions is very worthwhile if the students produce a

competent text at the end, and carry the requisite knowledge and skills

forward. Many of our students do not understand how the different parts of a

text differ in purpose and form, so it is well worth dissecting whole texts into

more manageable parts.

Stage 1:   Immersion

Students should be exposed to a large number of model texts from

the genre being taught.

These can be drawn from:

the work of previous students

published sources

the teacher themselves

During this stage, students should be encouraged to identify

common features. For example, lower, form students looking at

famous people read a lot of short biographies. Having read

several of these, students will notice (or be guided into noticing)

that they follow the same structure.

Stage 2:   Guided Reading:

In class, the teacher leads analysis of a good model of the genre. If

the genre was biography, the text in Appendix 1 could be

displayed on overhead transparency or power-point to enable the

teacher to model reading and annotation of the text. Students

would have their own copy.

With teacher guidance, students identify the following features,

which they have noticed in the texts they have read in the

immersion phase:

Orientation: name of person and why they are famous

Body: chronological sequence of events from the person's

life

Re-orientation: restatement of why the person is famous,

and explanation of their influence today.


and these language points:

Language features: verbs in past tenses; signal words

showing sequence; signal words showing cause and effect.

Contextual factors: formal tone; no personal pronouns for

writer or reader.

For an older class learning about Expository writing, the handout

in Appendix 2 would be given to the students as exemplars of the

Introduction. Despite the deliberately different styles, students

can identify the two phases necessary in an introduction:

Background: Identification of issue, explanation of its

importance and relevance to the reader.

Language Features: Use of present perfect/continuous tenses

to indicate timeliness of the issue. Movement from

generality to specificity.

Contextual Features:Absence of personal pronouns to

show universality and create authoritative tone.

Preview: Advising reader of purpose and contents of essay

to follow. Link with topic sentences.

Language Features:Common use of future tense to refer to

contents of essay. List of essay elements. Verbs indicating

mental processes (analyse, examine, consider, illustrate,

etc.)

Contextual Features: Impersonal tone. Absence of modal

verbs to create confident, definite tone.

Stage 3   Modelled Writing

On the blackboard, with a new topic, but in the same genre as the

model used in the guided reading, the teacher composes a new

text following the notes from the guided reading. An OHT with

the annotations already in place could be used. Emphasis here is

on making the construction process explicit. Students should be

made aware that the teacher is drafting, so perfection is not

necessary. As such, teacher could cross out, make changes, etc.

Stage 4   Joint Construction

Teacher and students compose a text together. Teacher elicits

student help in recalling generic features and in composing

suitable text. For beginner or less able groups, teacher might

prepare cloze or incomplete texts to prompt students. A successful

text might be cut/mixed up for students to return to its original

state.

The students should be familiar with the content matter, so pre-

reading and teacher guidance on concepts and vocabulary will be

essential.

 

 

Stage 5   Guided Writing

Students work in pairs, small groups, or individually, depending

on their levels of ability, preferably with a scaffold to base their

writing on. Teacher's emphasis at this stage is not on writing

errors, but on adherence to the scaffold. Successful examples

should be read out to the class to show peer proficiency.

Stage 6   Independent Writing

Students compose their own text in the new genre. As students

and teacher have invested a great deal of effort, expectations on

both sides should be high. The later stages of the writing process -

further editing, proofreading, correction, should be followed to

produce an exemplary text for each student.

Stage 7   Continued Use

In their subsequent use of the genre, students will have their own

notes, drafts, and final version to refer to. Teachers may supply a

checklist, and should use detailed criteria sheets to provide

feedback.

When introducing a new text-type within the genre, the same

process will be repeated to familiarise the students with the

features of the specific text=type. This is a relatively quick

process, as the students already have the fundamentals of the

genre under control.

 

 

Note: To help classes or individuals who experience difficulty at any stage, it

will be necessary to revisit the preceding stage for further practice.

 

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